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I'm critiquing this mostly to broadcast it to all of my watchers, rather than to actually...well, critique it. It's a very heartfelt image and it'd break my heart to pick at the faults, and I don't feel that way often.

The symbolism used is so powerful. The machine parts are a lovely addition and really contrast with the earth. and the organic look of everything above it. The writing is very powerful, too; it flows well and makes you think.

You've done a damn good job of putting all of this together. Lovely work! And for a good cause too.